Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Practising multiple professions or jobs for sustaining ourselves in this highly competitive world, and consistent upgrade of the skills by continuous education has become the norm nowadays. The notion of pursuing a single profession for income is becoming obsolete and outmoded. The following paragraphs will discuss the necessity of multiple career options and their advantages.
Things have changed a lot with respect to careers when compared to the past. Those were the days, where a person joins and retires from the same enterprise without any hassle. There were a lot of job security and secured pay scale year after year for them at that time. So, such people and of course, many of them, did not pursue multiple professions to secure their income. However, the mode of operations of all companies is impacted now by global phenomena such as recession and war. As a result, no one is secure in their job. In order to protect ourselves from losing income due to these unexpected circumstances, It is highly advisable to pursue multiple career options to keep our earnings intact.
Furthermore, one has to continuously upgrade their skills by educating themselves on the latest happenings in their respective fields. For instance, let's take the software industry. All the IT majors are recommending their employees become a full-stack developer rather than being expertise in a single technology. Those who cannot upgrade as full-stack developers are shown the doors. This is equally true for other professions as well, such as stock market trading or any business operations. It has become imperative to keep ourselves up to date in our respective careers for survival.
To conclude, It is always wiser on our part to have more than one career path for multiple sources of income and at the same time, keeping ourselves updated with continuous education is highly recommended.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
...terprise without any hassle. There were a lot of job security and secured pay scale year aft...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...e, lets take the software industry. All the IT majors are recommending their employees...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, well, as to, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20327868852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83063063048 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.045509651 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140184121798 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468597366586 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472252760066 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955453483598 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205515602251 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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