Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the present scenario, single career option in life is considered as the thing of past, while nowadays, people majorly focus on adopting multiple career goals that can bring more money and wealth. However, I do not agree with this notion and believe that focusing on one goal is far more advantageous than exploring the several career paths. In the following paragraphs , I will explain my opinion in detail.
To embark on, keeping one important goal in life certainly helps to bring abundant prosperity in life. For this, individuals firstly need to acquire formal education along with this, they have to show full potential,dedication, perseverance and hard work to fulfil it. Also, Engaging in multiple career goals do not end up with an excellent outcome, moreover, it brings distraction and disruption in performing various tasks at the same time. Therefore, focusing on one career goal is worth more fruitful for achieving success than putting hands in several things.
Contrary to this, there are some individuals who argued that indulging in various jobs and choosing several options in life possess more economy and maintain financial security. However, this trend is being followed by entrepreneur and those who have minimal education level and still want to earn well. But requiring formal education in different fields with one background is impossible or difficult, beacuse there is a particular standard of education, which everybody needs to follow, otherwise no one can get education in different courses, unless they follow specific requirement of educational institues.
To conclude, undoubtedly, single career path in life is in more achievable today , has bright future prospect than others. However, I believe, considering multiple options in life may not be beneficial than constantly working to achieve single goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89880044074 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1427840177 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226010255609 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799033028703 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376214460387 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133075556309 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376135179535 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.