A company is organising a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited places. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should:
• express That you want to join
• say why you think you should join
• explain why the organisers should select you
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request you for attending in a language training program that AB firm held in Frankfurt, and I would like to be a part of this.
Actually, a few days ago I have received an e-mail with the content of a german language course for companies. This program is for one month which is located in Frankfurt. In this course, we will learn about structure of formal letters and business letter. The teacher of course is german person and has as much as experience in this field. I heard he had held too many business language periods in all the world as present.
As you know, I work as sale manager in export department. We have good trades with our german's customers. In my opinion, this program can improve our knowledge to have better communication with a large part of our clients, and I believe that we can effect on our customers.
I think, I am a suitable person for this trip because I perform my duties as manager of export department, and also have the most connection with foreign countries such as Germany and Austria. I have to say this program places are limited and we have enrolled in as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
With regards,
Suzanne Yivonki
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...a german language course for companies. this program is for one month which is locat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...k as sale manager in export department. we have good trades with our germans custo...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have enrolled in as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, so, i think, of course, such as, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57918552036 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55886253676 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579185520362 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7452682773 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8461538462 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145238718087 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558028745333 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574022875526 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995223179301 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443304261135 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.