Ms Anderson
I am writing with regard to the German training trip which the company is organizing. Since there are limited places, I want to request for this training.
As you are informed, I have been recently entitled as the head of export team in sales department. Based on the annual reports which I am reading these days, our German clients are at the second position after English clients. Therefore, honing our German speaking skills might be extremely beneficial.
In order to boost my German language, I started self studying and I could reach an acceptable level in some months. However, being in a German atmosphere can help me test my ability. In addition, becoming familiar with German culture gives me the chance to shape strong bonds with German leads and take part in regional market as well.
I hope you consider the importance of this trip to me and the benefits I can attract to the company.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Nancy White
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ract to the company. Looking forward to hear from you Nancy White
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87951807229 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49377218189 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0093318819 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131123790491 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576962450261 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059692436836 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10048190263 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644212158962 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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