Nowadays, many health problems are spreading due to not having enough physical activity amongst workforce. This concern may have several reasons and can be tackled by some solutions.
Unfortunately, long working hours and sedentary life styles have avoided working people from doing exercise. Obviously full-time working makes employees exhausted and they can rarely schedule activities after work. Since there are a lot more home stuff to do, especially in the case of having children or dependants to take care of. On the other hand, we are stuck by numbers of distracting environments, like social media, in the era of technology, they simply act as time wasters unless we notice them. We become aware at the end of the day which we had been surfing the internet and social media for no particular reason for hours. This keeps us from starting useful activities, scientists name this phenomena as procrastination.
I personally believe that all reasons mentioned are in fact our minds’ trick to keep us free. Therefore the first step towards facing this reality is to prioritize our activities. As we all do the things which would not have outcomes in future, while being physically inactive would surely cause serious health problems. After persuading ourselves to start exercising, this is the time to take the first step as soon as possible., since our brain is smart enough to ignore the difficult things. Psychologists opine that the smaller the first step you decide to change something, the more probable is this to continue it to a regular basis. So start small, then enhance your efficiency day by day.
To sum up, lack of adequate physical activity among workforce is inevitable at our time, but we can face this concern by engaging to beneficial methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11301369863 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75467454423 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66095890411 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9595037719 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231719869251 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715777590023 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627797543264 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129517111678 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615902190602 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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