many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Exercise has a significant contributory in health. However, in recent years depending on modern life people has not enough exercise either in a workplace or in leisure time. Sedentary comes from working policy, modern life, unhealthy lifestyle.
In workplaces many employees have to sit in their vacancy and work hard, their employer asks to never have exercise; therefore, those kinds of policy harm employee health that unfortunately employers did not care staff health; moreover; they prefer their short-term benefits to long-term employee health.
It depends on modern life people use to technologies in their life to improve their life level, however, more using technologies such as TV and food makers can reduce or exercise in routine life; in addition, people do not use public transport and they would use their own private car, when people use their own car instead of public transport or bicycles, they reduce their exercise in life; therefore, it is might ta faces health problems such as arthritis.
The last but not least is people did not pay attention sports, because if people put some activities like going to gem or walking in their plan its can be very needful for has healthy life, if people use sports in their life they can be fresh and has a healthy life to do the best their jobs and educations.
To summarize, certain ineluctable hobbies cause people to face a dearth of exercise in their daily life. In my opinion, job opportunity and employer policy is a negative impact on employees and the government should settle some rules to improve jobs environments. Modern life and using plenty of technology in life reduced people activities and might face people with many diseases; therefore, people should do not use too many technologies in their life. Being unhealthy lifestyle people do not attend their body. They must be using sports time in their life and mass media should learn people how includes sports time in routine life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05214723926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58297691272 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509202453988 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.970130083 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.727272727 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262636486076 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120230237806 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454283072756 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163332227456 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251370416402 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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