Of late, reports are suggesting that, obesity and other health issues have been increased at a rapid speed in working professionals especially in white colored employees. The main reason behind this is, not having enough workouts and not spending enough time to do so. I shall discuss my views on this in this essay.
First and foremost, employees do spend good amount of time to complete their task and few might even take longer periods to finish the work, which has been assigned to them. And in non-working hours they would like to spend their time of what they desire. For example, enjoying with either families or friends or by doing their passionate works. Secondly, few professionals may think that they reached to the level what they wanted to be and as a result of this they stop doing the workouts.
To overcome this issues, both employers and employees should take necessary actions. First, employers had to install gym and other workout equipment’s in the work environment. Second, employers should also setup awareness campaigns and they should explain the health benefits of doing exercise. Employees, have to monitor their body mass index at regular intervals and if there are any changes in their body then they should immediately consider to start either running or any other workout activities. They could even start playing few games like badminton, tennis or any outdoor games. This would reduce the fat content in the body.
Being healthy should be the highest priority to any one, after all health is wealth. To overcome the health hazards in working professionals both employers and employees should work hand in hand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: little might
...ount of time to complete their task and few might even take longer periods to finish the ...
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Line 5, column 641, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld reduce the fat content in the body. Being healthy should be the highest prio...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...althy should be the highest priority to any one, after all health is wealth. To overcom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, after all, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54973999452 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7283156649 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211226648084 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726891669565 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409851624968 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138845062737 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348719495711 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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