Dear Rakesh,
Sorry, I haven’t written for ages. I’ve been so busy over the year and I never seem to have a time to myself. I was busy in arranging my travel to Canada and departure date is drawing near. I have enrolled for my Master’s Degree in Ottawa university. Though it is an expensive course, it will aid for my career growth.
To assist in covering my course fee, I aim to find a part time job. Not only are the college fees, I have heard the Capital city is very expensive for living as well. So I would like to arrange a part time job before I arrive. I will be having a free time of 4 hours after my college. So, I can take up any technical or non-technical work. I’m really good in technical part and I hope doing a technical job will also help my Masters. Nevertheless, I’m open to non-technical jobs too.
I was wondering if you could help me in getting a job. Could you please pass a work to your friends, in your family and to your relatives? I see you have a wide social network in Ottawa in which you can canvass for me. I'd be so grateful.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Sudheerkumar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...covering my course fee, I aim to find a part time job. Not only are the college fees, I h...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...g as well. So I would like to arrange a part time job before I arrive. I will be having a...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...Ottawa in which you can canvass for me. Id be so grateful. I look forward to seei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3133640553 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64057310131 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.445595824 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.0 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0555555556 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238725048076 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722477323492 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695148970317 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152421185855 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942599915894 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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