Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, animal’s rights are really important for many people. Some people think the human should respect their lives in all situations; however, some others and I believe it is acceptable for testing medicines for humans purposes on animals.
In many cases, it is dangerous to test some medicines surgery on the human body or new taps effective on people and they prefer to use that on animal’s body which is similar to human anatomy.
Many people are active in protecting animals right believe humans destroy animals life in worldwide and many animals are on extinct danger. Furthermore, despite the fact that increasing human population in many countries, markets demand meat product and people kill more animals such as pork, sheep or cow; therefore, many people believe a human should respect to wilds life and shouldn’t kill them for meat or medicines issue; for example, in some African countries some people give legal confirmation to testing medicines on elephants from government but they kill elephants for their ivory to sells that to westerns buyer in high prices.
According to rising new science especially medicine in many countries, human should find new methods to increase health and increase human life; thus, many scientists testing new medicines method on some animals especially mammals such as muse and monkey because their bodies are quite similar to the human body. If laboratories test our new medicines issues on animals, they can find all negative aspects that can occur on the human body in the future.
I think it is commonly acceptable to use medicine test on animals in many countries; however, governments can help some animal’s activities that are sensible about animal’s generation in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: medicines'; medicine's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'medicines'' or 'medicine's'?
Suggestion: medicines'; medicine's
...life; thus, many scientists testing new medicines method on some animals especially mamma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28621908127 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72469096702 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494699646643 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.830987837 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.0 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35063742644 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1858170615 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741593338244 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227660702567 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844313184275 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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