You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• give details of your visit to the restaurant
• explain the reason for the celebration
• say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you about our birthday party was held in last weekend in your traditional restaurant. We have enjoyed your restaurant facilities and delicious food.
Our celebration was held on 29th September at your tradition restaurant. Owing to the convenient location, and enough parking spaces had a good environment to access to your restaurant and make us glad to pick up your restaurant for the birthday party.
Our celebration was about my friend’s birthday how came back to the country after six years, and we can surprise him on the occasion.
Your staffs are helping us as well as they can, they provide food and dessert on time and provide all facilities. In response to our guests, all traditional food was good especially Mediterranean ones and Arabic deserts.
I hope your kind restaurant will always have excellent service and food to all guests.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cellent service and food to all guests. Yours faithfully, Jack Brown
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15032679739 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87976556021 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640522875817 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0011757625 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240940288174 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105868049298 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580241925526 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134867696536 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669980242557 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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