You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter> say where you think you left the papers>explain why they are so

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am jack brown, I have been meeting on 2nd September in your hotel in that your hotel held an accounting conference which is located in the central conference hall.

During the meeting, my seat number was 54 in the first floor of conference hall which is as I can remember I put my papers and my id card on the desk, unfortunately, I totally forget to take it after that.

As I told you that papers are really important to me because that’s related to my certificate in university and my national id card. I called to my graduated university about how they can issue the second certificate again, they told its take more than six months. It’s too much time because I had applied for a new job and they need my certificate in the following month.

Please check the issue with your staff. Should my documents find, please let me know.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Jack Brown

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68452380952 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65243197993 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1472900995 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140082119126 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581902672908 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550549734622 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784930689127 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548011944531 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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