During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
- Remind him when and where you met
- Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I was on a passenger flight from Istanbul to London on 21 September, it’s have been my pleasure to had a conversation with you. I want to inform you about yours suggest about a job opportunity in your chain restaurant in the London branches.
Should you cannot remember me, when I had explained my situation in London, you told me "your face is very familiar to me".
I’m an accountant and I like to help in recognizing revenue and save cash in your good branches. As I told you before on the journey, I have some experiences in the restaurant as an accountant in my country.
I’m a student in a master degree at London University on accounting skill. Should it possible, I can work as a part-time in different branches in London. I can help your staff how to check transactions and reduce expenses. For instance, make advances to cashier how to recognize and avoid fake foreign money. As you know, owing to current taxes law in London its needful to use an accountant, not only to check your process but also to make advice about new tax laws.
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. Hope to hear from you as soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Jack Brown
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70093457944 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7295960111 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.316059026 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3846153846 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201007838308 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748882360605 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669560013424 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128541830974 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055199317092 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.