You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
Our conference was held in your hotel on 25th September. I writing to inform you about some experiences our participants had in the hotel.
Our guests are totally interested your conference hall and facilities such as free Wi-Fi, the free package includes papers and pens. Moreover, they liked the reception and parking spaces which was your staff polite and warm welcoming to guests.
Unfortunately, many participate were unhappy about food because your colleagues served foods too late and the foods were so cold. It’s happened really dangerous for our conference and we receive many complaints about foods. In addition, some people complained about rice which was too salty for someone’s who had some disease and must to have a specific diet.
In my view, should your staff serve foods at a specific time, foods are still warm. I suppose to cook rice with little salt, in that not only someone’s does not like salty food, but also some people especially elderly ones have the disease and its harmful for them.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...s held in your hotel on 25th September. I writing to inform you about some experi...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...someone's who had some disease and must to have a specific diet. In my view, sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, as to, i suppose, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13978494624 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62123103172 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4391376259 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 4.34317383033 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25702293242 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911505096829 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050791080754 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123325507968 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563341928512 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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