Dear Mr.Reynold,
I am writing to you regarding an all-day meeting which was held at you hotel on June5th. I would like to share the feedback which I received over past few days.
First of all, all the participants expressed their gratitude for such a well-organised meeting. My collegues were quite impressed with the reception, big conference hall and the working staff. The service was always on time and everyone was polite and open to chat with.
However, there was one thing the participants were unsatisfied with, in fact, it was the food. Some of the dishes were overcooked, whereas some were too spicy. Additionay, a number of dishes seemed to be too salty, hence impossibe to eat.
Needless to say, that your hotel is one of the most famous and criticcally acclaimed hotels in our city. Taking this into consideration, I belive the level of food should be as good as the service. I suggest you look for another chef or discuss with the cooks how most of the dishes should be prepared or developed.
I am hopinf that you would look into these complaints and implement some changes to better serve the visitors and keep the hotel's reputation intact.
Yours Sincerely,
Clark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Reynold
Dear Mr.Reynold, I am writing to you regarding an all-...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...tisfied with, in fact, it was the food. Some of the dishes were overcooked, whereas some we...
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Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
... better serve the visitors and keep the hotels reputation intact. Yours Sincerely, C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, look, regarding, so, well, whereas, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68136806825 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651960784314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3699148925 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8461538462 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288988871553 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839690570896 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690293433367 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139670035501 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072782746562 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.