You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have some problems with my laptop which I bought from your store last week.
The laptop that I bought from your shop store is an ASUS brand. From three days ago, suddenly, it has several problems during my work; moreover, it becomes restart and I have been lost my data. It’s really a disappointment for me in that I could not recover my data.
As I told you, I have lost my work and I could not find it, it is too much cost for me to work again on my data and it takes several times.
I am too busy these days; however, if it is possible please makes me advise or change my laptop. should you cannot fix the problems, please refund my money as soon as possible.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Jack Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Should
...se makes me advise or change my laptop. should you cannot fix the problems, please ref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38993710692 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32508841845 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6974159344 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195681038737 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852879916966 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607025477412 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116525706846 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681280612361 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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