Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays children leisure time is a really important issue for families and societies; therefore, some people believe parents have a responsibility about their children leisure time; however, some people think parents should let children to they find own way how to spend their time. I totally agree with people who believe parents should plan their children leisure time.
Children are too small to think about their future and how to spend their leisure time in the right way. Should children think about their free time, they probably prefer computer games to some beneficial sports or lessons; therefore, parents have a high responsibility for their children to show the right way according to children interest. In my opinion, some sports or lessons are really useful for children lives and their future. For instance, learning a foreign language in childhood is so easier than adulthood and its essential for them when growing up.
On the flip side, some people think it’s essential for children to find their own lives and when they chose their way according to their emotions they can create future, better and they can improve how to make a decision. In addition, children have enough time to be free and enjoy their life and are not good matter to force children in hardships.
In conclusion, its necessary for children to enjoy their life and makes own decision; however, they could not make a decision as well as their parents. In my opinion, parents should help their children how to plan own leisure time to create future children in the right way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02671755725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42507021784 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446564885496 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8016203501 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437650308295 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228317485124 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777517824067 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330802944604 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287952681419 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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