Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In recent years, public health is a very important issue in different countries. I totally agree with people who believe sporting facilities has a profound effect on public health.
Many people believe public health is not depending on facilities and the important thing is an awareness of sports activities. Although many poor countries have not enough sports facilities, many people in those countries spend their time on sport; therefore, facilities are not too much effect on public health; moreover, when people have awareness about sports benefits they spend time and money on it. For instance, some unknown poor countries can achieve some important medals at the Olympics.
In my view, although many factors leading to appear people to public sports; however, sports facilities play key roles in public health. Should people have enough facilities, they have more convenience in doing sports. In addition, people when having plenty of facilities for sports, they spend their leisure time on the sport, it has a positive effect on public sports across the cities because many people have not the time to go to the gym or the sports clubs, thus, public facilities are the appropriate way to increase public sports between residents. Moreover, some elderly people cannot go far away and if they have suitable sports facilities in near home or in the closest public park, they more attract to use sports facilities and use their leisure time.
In conclusion, although some people believe sports facilities are not important for public sports. I think using sports facilities is very necessary to attract people into doing sports and making a healthy society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50915843069 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473880597015 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3924292438 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292849135769 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147632454155 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588127865364 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208850107325 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474834727459 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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