A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a citizen of Angel city which is located in the south of London. I’m writing to inform you about your kind decision in our area.
Our small city has many tacts in soccer. For instance, we have two members of the national soccer team in the country. Unfortunately, the city just has one soccer team in different ages. However, the club has not enough budget for the junior team. Should your company help our team, you can attract all people attention to your company. Our city has more than 500,000 population.
People in our city are really interested in music bands and our city is very familiar for a musician in that they can present their show with enormous people in our only concert hall, its notable our new built concert hall in the city center has capacity for 60,000 persons and when musician present in weekend our holiday ticket are sold out from one month before; thus, sponsorship companies are like our city to advertising their products.
In my view, it might be a good idea to spend money in junior local sports team because it seems you are responsible to sports and social responsibility; moreover, people more attention on soccer than a concert.
I hope you will have good sponsorship in our city.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Brown
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78666666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43580696188 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.940925221 44.8134815571 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 89.75 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147179348614 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594219310119 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559484817936 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743919863849 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050052177527 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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