Dear Madam,
I am writing to you to express my views in support of your company sponsoring the money for local children's sports team.
First of all I would like to appreciate the step taken by your company for sponsoring welfare activities. While sponsoring for two open air concerts is a good idea, sponsoring children's sports team for two years is a better one due to the severity of outcome involved. Open air concerts are a medium of entertainment whereas sponsoring sports team means investing in the future children. In my opinion, latter outweighs far more than former.
Sponsorship in sports would be a great help to those in dire need. Our local children's sports team has children with exceptional talent and who have won laurels at state level championships. Players in this team are diligent and strive hard to earn medals.
Sponsorship from a prestigious company like yours would give a big boost to the morale of this team. Children would benefit with the financial support as they would be provided with better sport equipment and facilities. I am sure that with your support and the teams hard work we would yield even better results in future.
Thanking you,
Amber
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 314, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...work we would yield even better results in future. Thanking you, Amber
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, whereas, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98009950249 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64059618255 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8777272579 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4166666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300486651036 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103329731246 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102799300252 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19755056517 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1097951833 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.