Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?
Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers.
In recent years, there is no doubt computers have big effect on every activities and life’s, therefore some people think computers had greatly increased human potential but some other people think computers had more of hindrance than help.
While some people believe computers have many negative aspect on the people life in that using more computers types in routine life such as using computers base equipment’s in houses are have result on people who have not enough activities in routine life and then affect on their health and make people are more lazier. Moreover, many computers have some radiation that effect on human and animal’s bodies who are far away about natural life in environments However, in fact there are many positive aspect on people life.
One of the possible negative consequences of using computers it maybe creation unhealthy issues but that negatives is mainly in result of incorrect usage of computers in that other people believes computers help people to increasing their potentials. People could planning to reduce unwanted negative aspect of computers which help medical and science technologies to protect people. In past people could not find and transfer their knowledge to each other’s easily but now they saving their data on computers to giving the others in a moment and specific time how that protect human educational activities to help their children.
In conclusion, while human undoubtedly increase their potentials with using computers. They reduce any negative effect of computers. Ideally, computers controlling people life truly in recent futures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ers base equipment's in houses are have result on people who have not enough ac...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ugh activities in routine life and then affect on their health and make people are more l...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lazier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lazier
...ect on their health and make people are more lazier. Moreover, many computers have some rad...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'aspects'?
Suggestion: aspects
...owever, in fact there are many positive aspect on people life. One of the possible ...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'plan'
Suggestion: plan
...creasing their potentials. People could planning to reduce unwanted negative aspect of c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45634920635 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72328349436 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515873015873 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0055089302 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.777777778 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357070090651 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154043732573 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855820614855 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230925404011 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730781206844 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.