Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people and I strongly believe that is not really important to have many languages in the world and it is possible to make life easier with fewer languages to live.

From past to now, many languages existed in the worldwide, that they do not exist in recent years; therefore; it is not really important to have such that languages in the world because many languages are naturally the same as each other but people changed it harder or easier and teach their children; thus, they finally create a new language. In some cases, many people in the past, changed the language to create more secretly than other languages to protect themselves from enemies.

It is really helpful for people that just have one specific language to facilities their communication and transaction. For example, nowadays, many people use English as an international language because they think English is easier than other languages; thus; if all people have one language or some specific language in their communication it makes more facilities their trade and relation in the world. For instance, social network makes the world as an international village and keep people together easily and it more important for people who use those networks to have one specific language to communicate; moreover, many businesses might have a better relationship with their customers that use one specific language.

Although many people think the government should protect language, some specific language in worldwide can develop better communication and transaction between people from east to west; therefore, people can live a better together with some specific languages.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30418250951 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73439287477 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460076045627 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5664223165 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.285714286 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5714285714 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259228249989 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16158771938 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722409276052 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201417663279 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664247346792 0.056905535591 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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