Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years unpaid community service is a really important issue in societies; therefore some people think high school student should work as unpaid community service, however, some people believe not. I totally agree whit people who believe should engaged students in charities.
When students working for a charity or improving the neighborhood, it helps them in improving their social responsibility. Moreover, they trying some new job, it’s really useful to make a decision for their future because they can be familiar with some new jobs. In addition, they know how to help other humans how to take care of the environment and people health. Moreover, working charities helps the student in improving their communication skills because they can make new relationship whit some known people. Owing to teenager ages, they could learn more than other ages, they can learn some skills in limited time.
Society needs people how to help others and when students work for charities or improving the neighborhood can positive effects on society. When society has enough volunteer to help others, especially in hardships. It’s very useful while society faces some problems and people have enough experiences to solve the issue. For instance, when an earthquake occurs in some parts of countries, the government have many experiences volunteers to want helps people and want to help other people. Meanwhile, people help each other in hardships, it positively affects people unity in society.
In my opinion, the human future depends on the community. Should society learn how to helps and take care each other, they can solve big problems in unity way; therefore, not only engaging students in some unpaid community service help they personality, but also helps society to improve human lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35314685315 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61500361834 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.609341204 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212910894381 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831629041466 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709989562952 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150512230749 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816358588739 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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