Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In recent years, tourists are spending more money on travel, although some people want to have a quiet time with their families, however, some people including young ones want some exciting time and enjoy adventure travel.
In my opinion, people need to have different experiences, they want to show their different hobbies to their friends and family, and they think usual tourism attraction is very usual and bored; therefore, they want to exciting adventure travels such as hardship deserts or hardship mountains, because those places are more different than the usual tourism destination. And they can put their photos on some social networks and receive more attends. Moreover, people are facing many hardships in adventure travels. although that hardship might be finish too expensive cost for travelers, adventure travel has many lessons for tourist.
On the other hand, adventure travels are really dangerous for people and they have to be careful in that locations. According to news many young people died or injured in adventitious trip on unusual destination. The government should settle new laws for tour leaders and tourism agencies to take care and take enough facilities to dangerous areas. In addition, everyone should be caution in their travel, because some young people go to some unknown areas and they are might be lost. However, with new technologies such as GPS people can have more adventure travel in comparing the past.
To summarize, adventure travel has some positive and negative point, although tourism including adventure has some negative impact on people, adventure tourism has a significant influence on people whom to build their life in hardships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35580524345 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56629475852 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.4176903117 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943986499245 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406608259898 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392465860987 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057502153491 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418642123289 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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