Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
With the increase in number of population and people visiting common places more frequently, there has been a change in people’s choice when it comes to visit places. In yester years, destinations with major facilities were preferred by travellers. But these days, they are more into going to undiscovered places for the reason that it makes them experience the nature in its raw form. But there certain advantages and demerits one need to look after before deciding to pay a visit to these sort of destinations.
Talking about the merit first, these kind of destinations enables humans to become stronger. In other words, it makes them survive in tough situations not only during their vacation, but also in their daily life. Consequently, this helps them to take correct decisions in emergency situations. Moreover, they provide them with life changing experience which can help them to become more creative. To illustrate, Mr. Larry Page once visited Kutla village of Himachal Pradesh, and only after that he was able to come up with the idea of Google.
Coming to the disadvantage, these destinations can prove to be fatal for the tourists and may also put them in isolation. These types of places are generally not meant to be easy. Due to which, a person carries the chance of getting serious physical injuries. And in some cases, it may even lead to death. As a result, this can create a detrimental impact on a person’s well being by causing problems with respect to his relationship, as well as employment. To exemplify, one of my friend went to Spiti Valley in Himachal Pradesh, where he met an accident while climbing a small peak and he had his left leg cut-off. Because of this he was not able to continue his job and is finally a dependent now.
To conclude, unusual places do carry a certain set of new adventure which can prove to be fruitful in certain life changing situations as people might gain power and become stronger. But they do carry a negative consequence of visiting such places. These destinations can harm them not only physically, but also mentally, hence, proper care must be taken before visiting these places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ns. Talking about the merit first, these kind of destinations enables humans to becom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, kind of, sort of, talking about, as a result, as well as, in other words, in some cases, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93715846995 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73747040432 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1284552606 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1052631579 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2105263158 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151217035019 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433459237297 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523161053272 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942311299471 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566492843918 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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