Describe an area of subject that you are interested in
You should say:
What it is
When it started to become interested in it
What we have learned from it
And explain why you have interest in it
Dear Victor,
I hope you have been doing well. It has been a while since we last met. I still remember that we went to visit a water park in Paris and we had a great time over there. It’s a shame that I had to come back, but they all are good memories. And yes, the main reason I am writing this letter to you is that I received your message regarding searching a job in India, but only for an year, as you would be moving back to France by gaining international exposure.
I did some research on my level and one of my Indian friends referred me a data analytical company Harsh Enterprises. It is offering a contract-based employment precisely for 11 months. It would be in north-west part of Delhi. The pay is good enough to hold all your expenses but they would be discussing it personally with the candidate. Timings are flexible too. Basic work would constitute of taking focus group interviews, and using different marketing research tools and techniques to come up with some good results to follow up on.
As you have done your Masters in Marketing, I believe the job would be good enough for you. Additionally, it is a multi-national company, which can help you to build up your resume comprehensively. Moreover, it is evident that you are more into data juggling and numbers as you were the only one to always score highest during our MBA.
Coming to the application part, although you can apply directly via their official website, you may have to come India for personal interview as this company believes in in-person discussion, rather than online. Also, there is a written exam, followed by group discussion for which you have to be present here. So, I would recommend you to come and take this interview in person. And don’t worry, all of these things would be covered in a day itself.
I will take care of all your needs during your stay as you would be living in my guest house. Afterwards we may go to see my city and I hope we will have a lot of fun.
Eagerly waiting for your positive response.
Yours lovingly,
Hemant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... searching a job in India, but only for an year, as you would be moving back to Fr...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce by gaining international exposure. I did some research on my level and one ...
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Line 29, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... positive response. Yours lovingly, Hemant
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Line 31, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response. Yours lovingly, Hemant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 937.175257732 183% => OK
No of words: 371.0 206.0 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63342318059 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64765773276 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 127.690721649 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 290.88556701 184% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5967821031 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1363636364 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86363636364 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147376001503 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450138633888 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486660974698 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081749578245 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060026614496 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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