Some people say that it is important to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
“Clothes should be used as cover on physical or nude bodies only and not on human’s soul”. It has been rightly stated by a famous author of ancient period. Certain individuals perceive that clothing is a big source of revealing one’s innate characteristics and their cultural backgrounds. To a certain extent I go by the notion as the outfits they opt to wear depicts a lot about their personality and religion, but, majorly, I would not abide by the fact as globalisation has made akin types of clothing available in almost every part of the world.
To begin with, admittedly, the style of attire the people wrap around them can reveal quite a lot about the culture or personality which one has received naturally or in heredity. Every caste has specific ethnic dress set for both men and women which differentiates from the rest. For example, the Sikhs have the tradition of wearing turbans to cover their head in masculines and also, evidently, Muslim ladies’ wearing black veil or burkhas is yet another and true personification and justification of the fact. Furthermore, this makes future generation learn more about their own caste and heritage. Similarly, for personality traits, a person who loves wearing bright colours is considered by science to be displaying more happy and positive emotions. Also, someone who is more brand freak with clothes can possess the characteristic feature of show off. To illustrate, Ranveer Singh, famous Indian actor is very jolly by nature. One can easily mark out by his bizarre and bright colours that he prefers to wear.
Having said that, I believe telling a lot about individuals nationality or caste is just another myth or judgmental statement passed by humans. People, these days love flaunting dresses of other religion. They count them as being a part of modern social world just by wearing outfits thatt belong to different nation. A lady wearing traditional indian saree should not be counted as someone possessing ancient thinking.In addition to it, A world that has been strongly hit by technology, internet and concepts like mondialisation, customers are just one click away from buying attires of their choice irrespective to which country or community they belong, what physical character or qualities they possess. Moreover, it cannot be said that a person liking to carry dull colours like grey, black or dark blue are not happy or satisfied in their life or are passing through some depressing period. To exemplify, while in case for cultures, Sikh people these day have shown a keen interest in adopting British people’s attire specifically long over coats. And, hence, they are considered as the most stylish community because of this mix match fashion. Additionally, it has brought people more closer on world level and surged global unity.
To conclude, albeit, perception of people about other individuals clothing, specially, their behaviour or nationality can prove to be right. It can be said so from their choice of attire passed on genetically by been born in a particular culture or by choice. Yet it is true disguise on other hand, as industrialisation has aided to shop similar products from all around the world at all places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 392, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'possesses'.
Suggestion: possesses
... saree should not be counted as someone possessing ancient thinking.In addition to it, A w...
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Line 9, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... as someone possessing ancient thinking.In addition to it, A world that has been s...
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Line 9, column 952, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...while in case for cultures, Sikh people these day have shown a keen interest in adopting ...
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Line 9, column 1193, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...on. Additionally, it has brought people more closer on world level and surged global unity....
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... all around the world at all places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, while, for example, in addition, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2729.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 529.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15879017013 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89281040313 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 176.041082164 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 850.5 506.74238477 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1127001192 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.652173913 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214815140732 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542580493799 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045122442336 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134190203066 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00977584986483 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.