Some people say that it is important to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
“Clothes should be used as cover on physical or nude bodies only and not on human’s soul”. It has been rightly stated by a famous author of ancient period. Certain individual perceive that clothing is a big source of revealing one’s innate characteristics and their cultural backgrounds. To a certain extent I go by the notion as the outfits they opt to wear depicts a lot about their personality and religion, but, majorly, I would not abide by the fact as globalisation has made akin types of clothing available in almost every part of the world
To begin with, admittedly, the style of attire the people wrap around them can reveal quite a lot about the culture or personality which one has received naturally or in heredity. Every caste has specific ethnic dress set for both men and women which differentiates from the rest. For example, the Sikhs has the tradition of wearing turbans to cover their head in masculines and also, evidently, Muslim ladies’ wearing black veil or burkhas is yet another and true personification and justification of the fact. Furthermore, this makes future generation learn more about their own caste and heritage. Similarly, for personality traits, a person who loves wearing bright colours is considered by science to be displaying more happy and positive emotions. Also, someone who is more brand freak with clothes can possess the characteristic feature of show off. To illustrate, Ranveer Singh, famous Indian actor is very jolly by nature. One can easily mark out by his bizarre and bright colours that he prefers to wear.
Having said that, I believe telling a lot about individuals nationality or caste is just another myth or judgmental statement by humans. A world that has been strongly hit by technology and internet and concepts like mondialisation, customers are just one click away from buying attires of their choice or interest irrespective to which country, nationality or community they belong or what physical character or qualities they possess. Moreover, it cannot be said that a person liking to carry dull colours like grey, black or dark blue are not happy or satisfied in their life or are passing through some depressing period. To exemplify, while in case for cultures, Sikh people these day have shown a keen interest in adopting British people’s attire specifically long over coats. And, hence, they are considered as the most stylish community because of this mix match fashion. Additionally, it has brought people more closer on world level and surged global unity.
To conclude, albeit, perception of people about other individuals clothing, specially, their behaviour or nationality can prove to be right. It can be said so from their choice of attire passed on genetically by been born in a particular culture or by choice. Yet it is true disguise on other hand, as industrialisation has aided to shop similar products from all around the world at all places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 681, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...while in case for cultures, Sikh people these day have shown a keen interest in adopting ...
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Line 9, column 922, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...on. Additionally, it has brought people more closer on world level and surged global unity....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, while, for example, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 486.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12757201646 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92693647068 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569958847737 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.8515224683 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237219633861 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059534770252 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465860116631 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141584741479 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151848890693 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.