Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, a not so common trend has been started wherein most of the people are more inclined towards having their own business instead of being employed. Now the question here is what caused this? It because is they have developed keen interest towards earning more money and become rich at early stage in life. But it may have some negative impact on work life balance as it can easily cause detrimental impact on the person’s well being.
Everyone loves money and living in the materialistic world somehow forces today’s generation to get most of it during their initial working years. This is why men prefer to work by themselves and not for someone else. It not only enables them to have a better lifestyle for them, but also for their kids. Consequently, it provides them with better future, as well as a good place in society. Moreover, it facilitates them with purchase of fixed assets like a house, which is near to impossible because of low income level and inflated property rates. To exemplify, a recent survey by South China Morning Post revealed that people even with 5 figure salary are not able to buy their own home in Hong Kong because of sky touching prices.
Having said that, this practice can cause adverse effects in creating proper balance between an individual’s personal life and work life. Own business generally requires long working hours which can hamper the physical as well as mental health of the owner. Furthermore, it also impacts their relationship with their family, which can have hazardous effect. This in turn, can result badly for them as they won’t be happy and this may also lead them to isolation, ultimately affecting their well being. To illustrate, latest economic times study revealed that people who run their own business normally have bad relationship with their families. They also presented the data in which 78% of them complained about heath related issues and a constant headache.
To conclude, no one can deny the fact that money has been the driving factor due to which people are focusing on getting succeeded by having their own start-up and not being a salaried individual. But the demerits it carries of bad influence on health and imbalance between work and personal life are way too big to ignore and should be looked after.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54288380977 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572890025575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7707730063 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134348285722 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466487444665 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484536626918 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955917772396 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031238492758 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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