Some people say international sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree?
Owing to the history and its consequences, countries have learned from their mistake and realized that peace is the only way to survive. Now, a better part of society believes that overseas sports tournaments play a vital role to maintain these relations. I completely agree with the above notion for the reason that it not only helps in diminishing disparities, but also brings up like minded people at same stage, ultimately resulting in harmony.
Sport events help in reducing differences, along with building a better relationship. They enable countries to show their power by means of sports. In other words, this practice plays an instrumental role in bridging the gap between regimes and provides them with platform in order to show their strength. Moreover, people from different ethnicities and nations come to witness these games, which in turn, paves way for better business, ultimately improving relations. For instance, America and China, who are always on the verge of war, try to showcase their capabilities along with superiority by defeating each other at Olympics. Evidently, this not only plays a crucial role in decreasing the tension between these authorities, but also results in fruitful discussions and dialogues which are of an utmost importance for international peace.
Furthermore, people follow their idols without thinking about the land they belong to. Overseas players have consistently played prominent role to bring out their fans together from different parts of the world. To illustrate, even after being from India, Sachin Tendulkar is worshiped and followed by their nearest counter part Pakistan. Entire Pakistani population praises him whenever he comes to bat, and his etiquette along with the perseverance he possess, is followed by management institutions in the country. This shows that although, there maybe some situations wherein mindset of two different governments differ from each other, it does not necessarily means that there need to be severe consequences. All such problems can be solved through meaningful ways which these events indirectly make way for. Consequently, meeting and greeting in such a place where the only thing one can do is enjoy, certainly does nothing but promote peace.
To conclude, there is no denying that these entertaining events have marched upon us and made us a better human being. It has led way for us towards peace and made governments understand that peace is the only way forward. Additionally, these events result in bringing up fans from different parts of world and places them adjacent to each other. Hence, eliminating all the complaints and making our world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81207647814 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591981132075 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1231078592 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137557002893 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400005668095 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366598479225 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861887138994 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220321716746 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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