With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life.
Is it important to keep our traditional ways of life?
How can this be achieved?
Traditional ways of life have been lost with the advent of technological era. It is worrisome not to lose our conventional ways of spending life. Hence, it is important to keep our traditional lifestyle. This can be achieved by honouring the cultural values, beliefs, practices and family collectiveness. It is for these reasons that traditional lifestyle is as important as modern society.
Nowadays people prefer to live in developed society which comprises of advancements in science and technology. With the invention of cell phones, television and internet has dramatically changed today’s lifestyle. In addition, medical science has drastically flourished due to technological development. Hence, certain diseases have been vanished from the most part of the world. A recent research conducted at University of Texas show that the infant mortality rate has been decreased by 70% because of neonatal intensive care units. Although advanced society has its benefits, but traditional lifestyle also plays important role in individual’s life.
People who are physically and emotionally strong make a healthy and peaceful society. It is important to focus on cultural upbringing while nurturing of new generation. Otherwise, the individuals would be more robotic, and more prone to stress and crime than ever before. Parents should spend quality time with children instead of leaving them with gadgets like tablets, cell phones or video games. As a result, they will learn morals, ethics and how to behave in everyday matters. Moreover, it would create a society consisting of empathetic people and strongly bonded relationships. In one study, there is a direct correlation between raising young people and community, the more culturally brought up youngsters are less likely to get involved in social and economic crimes. Therefore, emphasizing on individual’s brought up in traditional way would lead to harmonious society.
In conclusion, no doubt modern technology leads us towards better tomorrow. However, it should be used to assist us in day to day life, but not to drive us away from our traditional lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...efer to live in developed society which comprises of advancements in science and technology....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5762195122 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15745196322 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0247063799 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0952380952 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369736928388 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907661265451 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936791764284 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221487934687 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173992179489 0.056905535591 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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