With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life. Is it important to keep our traditional ways of life? How can this be achieved?
The world has evolved rapidly in the past 100 years. A technological revolution has paved way for many new lifestyles and habits and consequently rise in bad practices and also multiple ailments. Hence, I believe that it is necessary to respect the old ways which have proven to be effective. This essay will discuss how bringing awareness to youngsters and role of parents to inculcate the habits will prevent them from going obsolete.
There is ample evidence that traditions and culture have shaped the human beings what they are at the moment. They have pivotal role in the evolution of human beings. The central reason for this is certain steps have been laid out for individuals and society follow in order to lead a peaceful harmonious life. This acted as a blue print for many centuries and tribes to follow. To illustrate this, Agriculture and farming still follow conservative methods of killing pests and many farmers across the world believe that nature is the best pesticide for the crops and will result in high yield instead of chemically infused products. Thus it is possible to state that the ancient science is still prevalent in this contemporary world.
Regular congregations and spreading the importance of practicing them to the present generation are few approaches that could be followed . In addition to this, healthy old habits such as early to bed and early to rise have be imbibed by the parents while growing up as they lay a concrete foundation in the minds of kids. To exemplify this, individuals coming from an indigenous culture refuse to change their beliefs and practices as they have yielded positive results over the years, Therefore it is conclusively clear that following traditional methods from an early age will contribute for a better today and tomorrow.
To sum up, although the world is evolving at an incredible pace, one should not forget the practices that has led it to this stage. The onus is on the parents and leaders to uphold them by inculcating and spreading awareness among youngsters.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... will prevent them from going obsolete. There is ample evidence that traditions ...
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...instead of chemically infused products. Thus it is possible to state that the ancien...
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...eading the importance of practicing them to the present generation are few approa...
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...re few approaches that could be followed . In addition to this, healthy old habits...
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Suggestion: been
... as early to bed and early to rise have be imbibed by the parents while growing up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69755721581 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1382390654 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143782143035 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441895407224 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328828580256 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773675835578 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034317772367 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will prevent them from going obsolete. There is ample evidence that traditions ...
^^^
Line 2, column 635, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...instead of chemically infused products. Thus it is possible to state that the ancien...
^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eading the importance of practicing them to the present generation are few approa...
^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re few approaches that could be followed . In addition to this, healthy old habits...
^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... as early to bed and early to rise have be imbibed by the parents while growing up...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69755721581 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1382390654 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143782143035 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441895407224 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328828580256 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773675835578 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034317772367 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.