People who buy friendly vehicles like electric cars should receive a subsidy on tax. This will discourage people from buying polluting cars and thus lower emissions. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Smoke emitted from cars is one of the major contributors to air pollution. Some argue that subsidy on eco friendly cars will help people migrate from regular cars and consequently bring down the carbon dioxide levels , I disagree to this statement. This essay will discuss how the priorities of a user whilst purchasing a vehicle and the hassles involved in maintaining an environment friendly car play a key role in the decision making along with relevant examples to support my statement.
There is ample evidence that people look at various features before buying a car such as durability, mileage and performance leaving the price of the car at the bottom of list. The central reason for this is production and research of electric cars is still in the nascent stage, people would not tend to invest thousands of dollars on a machine which might not prove its utility worth. To illustrate this, a recent report from the Nation Automobile Board indicates that electric cars have reported highest number of fatalities in road accidents due to untimely breakdown of engine. Therefore it is conclusively clear that safety and comfort of an individual is prioritized over the value of machine.
Secondly, repair cost, maintenance and location of charging spots is a hassle which could refrain people from purchasing electric cars despite being an economical alternative. The cost of repairs and the time spent in searching for a charging spot to recharge the battery is considerably higher , than a regular car making it unattractive for potential customers. To illustrate this, an Oxford university survey states that maintaining a Tesla EV is 20% higher than a regular Ford car due its requirement to constantly update its electric system. Thus it is possible to state that when all the costs weighed in, a normal car is a preferred at this juncture.
To conclude, although there is a possibility of bringing down the emission levels of atmosphere by providing subsidies on EV purchases, in my opinion unless the requirements of the consumers change along with improvement in post purchase services, there is slim hope of fueling the usage of eco friendly vehicles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09550561798 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8634105325 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587078651685 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.851842541 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.166666667 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322064373834 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109708798711 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706430173383 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177369255632 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852426968672 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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