Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Increasing crime rate, especially the youth is alarming in majority of cities across the globe. While unforeseen population growth and lack of employment opportunities comprises the top two reasons, stringent policy making and occupying youngsters with social work are some measures to prevent youngsters from entering the criminal world.
There is ample evidence that higher unemployment rate is key aspect for creating more juveniles. The central reason for this is rising population. With more number of people competing for limited jobs, many of them resort to violence and take up unlawful path. In addition to this, it also reduces the number of police officers per thousand population, making the potential criminals believe they could get away with an offence. To illustrate this, an oxford research study suggests that cities with 200 police officers for thousand people have often resulted in less than 100 law breaking incidents in the past 5 years. Therefore it is conclusively clear that young men and women, unwaged due to insufficient work often break the law out of necessity.
The onus is on the government to bring down the curve by drafting effective policies and also ensuring the implementation of the same. Strict implementation of laws creates a sense of fear among young citizens and could make them think twice before acting on their instincts. Furthermore, the administration should also focus on utilizing the young adults to partake in various social activities such as to take care of old people at old age homes and also other state related events so that they are occupied and have a sense of belonging towards the society. For instance, BBC news has covered a story on a 26 year old Florida man , a reformed criminal who now works at a non profit organization which care takes stray and injured animals, who is an inspiration to many and setting an example to others. Thus it is possible to state that bureaucracy support for disturbed youth is imminent in leading a lawful life.
In conclusion, the growth in unlawful actions by youngsters either due to joblessness or for an easy lifestyle, has to be brought under control by execution of the laws strictly and creating opportunities to make them part of the community
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06720430108 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80540169356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610215053763 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3873966294 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.642857143 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140798173309 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546051763298 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628002507306 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802716456316 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512733320262 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.