Question: some people think making more money is being happier.
What do you think? Can money buy happiness?
Money is a resource which everyone in this world wants to possess. Some equate money with happiness higher earnings equals greater happiness, I do not agree to this point of view. Happi-ness is very subjective and the definition varies from each individual to another. In this essay I will discuss how worshipping god and travelling across the world bring contentment to people along with examples to support my views.
Money cannot buy happiness, that being said, one can buy things which can cheer people. Vari-ous sections of society have different concepts of happiness. Religious people tend to be satis-fied by indulging themselves in the service of god by worshipping and also participating in var-ious religious activities. The eastern philosophy is that inner peace is the ultimate source of long term happiness which can be obtained by spirituality. Individuals who travel, seek joy by visit-ing new places and viewing the nature at its best is pleasure which cannot be measured. To il-lustrate this, an Oxford university study states that 80% of individuals who love nature respond-ed that no amount of money can compensate a beautiful view of stars on a dark night. There-fore it is possible to state that there are situations where money is not essential in order to be content in life.
There is ample evidence that earning more money causes more problems. The viscous cycle of earning money hamper human relationships and also potential behavioral changes as gradually money enslaves a person. In fact, it is observed that 50% of billionaires regret that they couldn’t spend their youth with their parents, spouses and kids and wish they could go back in time to prevent that from happening. Thus is is conclusively clear that focusing on gaining more inflow of cash can only make miserable with lack of time to focus on family and friends as increased money involves increased pressure.
To conclude, I believe although money is the fuel to run this world, focusing solely in earning money can only result in having a bad life and also happiness is not gauged by money earned but can be sought in activities one enjoys from their heart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04469273743 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73195210624 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594972067039 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8627621107 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301427646405 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953721744203 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696392762394 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178067409768 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254811304743 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.