Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Moving across different locations for jobs have undeniable impact of children. Some argue that they benefit immensely when moved to a new country, I agree to this thought. This essay will discuss how it could lead kids to better education and new places to explore along with drawbacks associated such as cultural shock and possible communication gap citing relevant examples to support the points.
On the one hand, there is ample evidence that there is a certain improvement of education standards observed with majority of the children. The central reason for this is, many families migrating from third world countries to developed countries, kids notice a stark difference in the methods employed in teaching and curriculum which incidentally is a level up in many ways. In addition to this, there are new places to explore and experience which might not be available or possible in their native lands. To illustrate this, people from African countries to any western country might experience snowfall which would not have been possible had they not moved. Therefore it is conclusively clear that children get to experience new places and avail education which is cut above from their past.
Although there is a case for new experiences and good education, the complexity to adapt to a new culture cannot be understated. The minds of youngsters are in nascent stage and still evolving because of which they might not able to comprehend the change and adapt instantly. Furthermore, it is not easy for many of them to make new friends from a different culture. This is primarily due to the communication gap as the existing language might not be their first language to put their thoughts across and start a conversation which consequently increases loneliness among kids. For example, an Oxford University report suggest that 45% of immigrant children between age 7-12 feel lost and lonely more than others. Thus it is possible to state that the movement could leave a lasting impact on child’s psyche due to change of culture and lack of friends and support system.
To sum up, despite kids experiencing difficulty adapting to a new lifestyle and language, in my opinion the benefits of having a upgrade in education and experiencing new things in life eclipses the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, incidentally, so, still, therefore, third, thus, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08776595745 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78261021171 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.680417597 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149797323033 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539646317112 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470313242186 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888377655899 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498609933892 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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