Write a letter to a sports club manager complaining about the club. In your letter write
• Why you have joined the club
• What is the problem you are facing
• And what actions you are expecting manager to take
Dear Mr. Arora,
Thank you for starting such a wonderful club for all the physical activities, as people are making most of it. However, I am writing this letter to express my concern over one issue faced by me.
The major reason to be a part of the place is that I wanted to put off some weight of my body. Because of the improper work life balance, including unhealthy eating habits, I was diagnosed with diabetes last month. And In order to stay healthy, mentally as well as physically, I joined your club.
But there is one problem pertaining to swimming pool that is creating chaos not only for me, but also for other members. The temperature of water constantly stays below appropriate level. Since the climate is a bit moderate, it should be a bit warm. But the care taker never takes it seriously. Additionally, there is always a pile of garbage in the lower area of pool, which seems unhygienic.
I would be happy to see you taking some serious decisions about the inconvenience caused. I am expecting you to make the care taker understand that water should be as per the comfort of people. Also, please make sure that proper cleaning is done on bi-weekly basis to avoid situations wherein some rubbish stays in pool.
If any of the problems are neglected, then I am sorry to say but it may have a detrimental impact on your club and people might even discontinue coming here.
I hope you take the matter seriously and resolve the problems at the earliest. Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Mr. Mehta
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72324723247 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62204581375 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9404832571 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2941176471 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235761301656 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643062140741 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059599952264 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11467564626 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604121140766 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72324723247 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62204581375 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9404832571 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2941176471 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235761301656 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643062140741 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059599952264 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11467564626 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604121140766 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.