A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• Say why you the job would be suitable for him/her
• Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Victor,
I hope you have been doing well. It has been a while since we last met. I still remember that we went to visit a water park in Paris and we had a great time over there. It’s a shame that I had to come back, but they all are good memories. And yes, the main reason I am writing this letter to you is that I received your message regarding searching a job in India, but only for an year, as you would be moving back to France by gaining international exposure.
I did some research on my level and one of my Indian friends referred me a data analytical company Harsh Enterprises. It is offering a contract-based employment precisely for 11 months. It would be in north-west part of Delhi. The pay is good enough to hold all your expenses but they would be discussing it personally with the candidate. Timings are flexible too. Basic work would constitute of taking focus group interviews, and using different marketing research tools and techniques to come up with some good results to follow up on.
As you have done your Masters in Marketing, I believe the job would suit your interest. You already have a strong experience with marketing sector as you were regularly engaged with boosting up the sales of former companies through promotional selling techniques. Moreover, it is evident that you are more into data juggling and numbers as you were the only one to always score highest during our MBA. Therefore, you are best-suited for this job in my opinion. Additionally, it is a multi-national company, which can help you to build up your resume comprehensively.
Coming to the application part, although you can apply directly via their official website, you may have to visit India for personal interview as this company believes in in-person discussion, rather than online. Also, the company has recently enlisted the same job opening on Linked-in which I got to know from the same friend whom I mentioned earlier as he works over there. You can choose either one of them but make sure you apply for this job before it gets expired.
I will take care of all your needs during your stay as you would be living in my guest house. Afterwards we may go to see my city and I hope we will have a lot of fun. I am eagerly waiting for your positive response.
Yours lovingly,
Hemant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... searching a job in India, but only for an year, as you would be moving back to Fr...
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Line 27, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... positive response. Yours lovingly, Hemant
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Line 29, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response. Yours lovingly, Hemant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 32.9175257732 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 937.175257732 206% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 411.0 206.0 200% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69099756691 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67001893827 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 127.690721649 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571776155718 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 290.88556701 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6804123711 181% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.83119982 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8260869565 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417589059482 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113451833633 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934764225762 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224292415379 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096135606735 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 41.2886597938 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.