Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
These days, a well-balanced physical place with good ambience and cleanliness is looked after as a necessary component to work or live in. It is perceived by some that keeping a house or an office tidy along with organizing things properly, is of utmost importance to them. I believe that, keeping a place neat as well as managed is quite important. Not only it represents a good personality of an individual in front of others, but also helps them to keep up good with their physical health. And, in some cases, it has also proved to play a crucial role.
To start with, this habit portrays a person as good looking from someone else’s point of view. It makes them look well-mannered and helps them in achieving greater tasks. Moreover, it helps them to grab larger responsibilities in their employment which may have positive impact on their career. For instance, a person may get to work for a high level employee of that organization like CEO. They can get a role of personal secretary because of their good organizing skills. Consequently, uplifting them in front of society.
Another reason why this could affect them positively is that it would eradicate most of health related issues. It can cause little or no disease at all as a neat and tidy environment attracts less germs and diseases. Eventually, it will help to save money as well as time, as they would not have to get treatment. To exemplify, in New York, corporate these days have a policy of regular spray of mosquito repelling liquids to eliminate infections and any mishappening caused because of these insects.
Coming to the last benefit, managing things properly can help individuals during emergency situations. If a person is in dire need of a document which he/she may not be able to find, then they are bound to face negative impacts. To illustrate, I once was not able to find my passport due to my lethargic nature, because of which I missed my flight and I had to take another one. As a result, I had to book another flight, costing me an entire day and 100 dollars.
To conclude, according to me, area cleanliness and management is as important as taking care of self. And it requires less efforts if we follow up on regular basis. It keeps diseases away, helps in building a good image, and plays a vital role during emergency situations. Hence, they this practice should not be avoided and must be carried on by everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77488151659 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75628275572 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5106727201 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6086956522 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097842261844 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283399259681 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380479898148 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053273487607 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544637611008 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.