Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Clothes are one commodity than can either be too revealing, or none at all, when it comes to providing information about a person’s own character or about his/her culture. It is believed by some that attire can play an instrumental role to reveal such information. But, in my opinion, though it may tell about a person’s culture as it plays a vital role in providing such data, it may not be true for character mapping of an individual for the reason that it does not tells about how good or bad a person might be.
To start with, clothes can easily tell about a person’s culture as it can reveal a lot about someone who belongs to it. In other words, clothes can prove to be vital in explaining about the kind of heritage someone has, his/her ethnicity, and the area he/she belongs to. Moreover, it may also provide content with respect to a person’s religion. To exemplify, people who belong to worshipping places wear clothes related to not only their religion, but also their culture. Consequently, it tells a lot about their tradition and the caste or religion they belong to.
Having said that, this may not be true for character mapping of an individual because clothes do not tell that what type of person that individual might be. It is something that cannot be judged merely by clothes. This is rather inculcated within him/her naturally. And therefore, he/she can be well mannered or dangerous. Infact, in many cases, it has been found that people with bad intentions rather dress up properly and henceforth, reduce the chance of getting caught. To illustrate, recent report by Delhi Police department highlighted that there have been increase in number of robberies in particularly north delhi wherein, the criminals disguise as literate salesperson. This makes people believe in them and these criminals take advantage of this opportunity by robbing them.
To conclude, no one can deny the fact that it is easy to know about a person’s culture by the attire they wear and people who believe so are absolutely right at their end. But when it comes to tell about their character, according to me, this is not the case as no one can predict or say about someone’s behaviour or character just by seeing their clothes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tell'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: tell
...ividual for the reason that it does not tells about how good or bad a person might be...
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Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'tell'
Suggestion: tell
...ividual for the reason that it does not tells about how good or bad a person might be...
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Line 13, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...character just by seeing their clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in particular, kind of, in many cases, in my opinion, in other words, to start with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79324535238 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1018599079 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.176470588 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291498077761 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905248491348 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771458154686 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18791277743 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711175377903 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.