Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers don’t need a training course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Training plays a vital role in overall development of any professional. In case of teachers, it is thought by some that getting trained is not essential for the reason that this type of profession does not requires to get trained and hence can be avoided. Whereas, for others, it is of an utmost importance as it not only provides a methodology to follow, but also generates unique ways in which students can be taught. In my opinion, the latter one proves to be more fruitful and should be followed.
Owing to a prescribed procedure, trainers can easily impart basic lessons in a meaningful way. In other words, they can make learning an easy process by introducing a timetable which would ultimately avoid repetition of unwanted classes. Consequently, this will help in saving time and make learners focus precisely on important things. To exemplify, Indian Business School recently came up with mandatory training of 2 months for new faculty. This practice helped them in communication process with students and they were able to pass their knowledge in an enhanced manner, leading to an increase in better final results. Additionally, this process results in creation of new ways of teaching. It helps in origination of innovative methods by brainstorming, which in turn, can be more effective. Furthermore, it helps in generating a positive approach towards facing difficulties in process of teaching with wider perspective. This henceforth, can turn out to be a major asset in terms of teaching as a profession.
Coming to the part wherein it is felt by some that training need not be present in education process, is perceived by them as redundant. It is a result of prolonged traditional way of practicing, which has made these people adamant. To illustrate, government teachers in India are not required to go through a general training process of how to teach. When asked them to follow up a new regime of getting trained first, they instantly declared an all India strike and somehow government dropped this idea. As, a result, students of government schools are yet to make a mark in educational sector.
To conclude, a good number of people still tend to follow the easy path of traditional way of doing things and not indulge in a required training process, which can cause detrimental impact on learning of children. If not trained, these individuals may lack basic understanding of how to teach productively. And according to me, the idea of a proper step by step guide to teach should be made compulsory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'require'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: require
...n that this type of profession does not requires to get trained and hence can be avoided...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...n that this type of profession does not requires to get trained and hence can be avoided...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...is type of profession does not requires to get trained and hence can be avoided. Where...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a meaningful way" with adverb for "meaningful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rainers can easily impart basic lessons in a meaningful way. In other words, they can make learning...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an enhanced manner" with adverb for "enhanced"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... they were able to pass their knowledge in an enhanced manner, leading to an increase in better final...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, whereas, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01895734597 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97485493934 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0487804705 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148793217143 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434573124975 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495010022297 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990686055688 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049952565321 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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