Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
With the increase in number of population and people visiting common places more frequently, there has been a change in people’s choice when it comes to visit places. In yester years, destinations with major facilities were preferred by travellers. But these days, they are more into going to undiscovered places for the reason that it makes them experience the nature in its raw form. But there certain advantages and demerits one need to look after before deciding to pay a visit to these sort of destinations.
First and foremost benefit for travellers is that these kind of destinations enables them to become stronger. In other words, it makes them survive in tough situations not only during their vacation, but also in their daily life. Consequently, this helps them to take correct decisions in emergency situations. Moreover, they provide them with life changing experience which can help them to become more creative. To illustrate, Mr. Larry Page once visited Kutla village of Himachal Pradesh, and only after that he was able to come up with the idea of Google. Another important advantage is that these sort of places makes a person satisfied. While experiencing their holiday, they see local people living in these untamed areas who are living without basic amenities and still are able to survive. This in turn, gives them a sense of purpose in life and makes them thankful for whatever they have. To illustrate, Steve Jobs once visited Nepal and he stayed there for a month. It is because of this that he was able to have satisfaction with his work and therefore, he was able to create Apple company.
Coming to the disadvantages, these destinations can prove to be fatal for the tourists and may also put them in isolation. These types of places are generally not meant to be easy. Due to which, a person carries the chance of getting serious physical injuries. And in some cases, it may even lead to death. As a result, this can create a detrimental impact on a person’s well being by causing problems with respect to his relationship, as well as employment. To exemplify, one of my friend went to Spiti Valley in Himachal Pradesh, where he met an accident while climbing a small peak and he had his left leg cut-off. Because of this he was not able to continue his job and is finally a dependent now. Visiting these dangerous places may also put these people into isolation. There has been a research by Oxford University wherein they revealed that people who go to these places are more prone to feel alone because of the environment these areas provide. They further stated that visiting such places can cause people mental distress and therefore, they must avoid going to these places.
To conclude, unusual places do carry a certain set of new adventure which can prove to be fruitful in certain life changing situations as people might gain power and confidence along with gaining satisfaction. But they do carry some dangerous demerits which can harm them not only physically, but also mentally, hence, these should be looked after.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, kind of, sort of, as a result, as well as, in other words, in some cases, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 521.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92322456814 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64751285358 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506717850288 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9050092509 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0384615385 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57692307692 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168294727449 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477434457365 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497573516353 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109779909476 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621145263067 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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