Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
it is often argued that younguns should be made to follow strict rules of conduct, while others argue that they should be granted the freedom to express themselves freely and not follow any guidance. First, This essay will discuss that children reared under the strict rule of conduct are more stable and enjoy a healthy relationship with their parents. Second, it will discuss how children who are allowed the freedom from rules live to be more emotionally independent and happy individuals.
There are numerous reasons of why children should stick to well-defined rules of conduct, but the most important one stems from the fact that the rules of behavior teach them the value of respect for their parents. rules make for a much stable and measured individual as they know how to react to everyday situations, which might make them angry or excited. Hence, they are more likely to have an intense relationship with their parents as they expect respect from their children. For example, a study with pre-teens found out that an overwhelming majority of them agreed that they were much closer to their parents because they had strict rules of conduct enforced in their homes.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and believe that freedom of behavior is significantly vital for the individual emotional expression and freedom of the pre-teens. having a set of rule dictate your response to everyday life curbs the ability of younguns to learn from previous experiences. when children learn how to deal with their emotions, they are in betIt is imperative that children have freedom when it comes to expressing their range of behaviors, especially their right to express anger, happiness. As children learn how to deal with their problems and emotions reactions to them, they are much happier and emotionally independent. For instance, a study conducted in the university of Delhi found out that a majority of people agreed that they were much happier when they had the freedom to express themselves freely at home during their childhood.
In conclusion, while strict adherence to rules makes for significantly more stable individuals with a stable relationship, kids who had a higher degree of freedom when it came to their behavior enjoyed a more happier life and elevated levels of emotional dependency. Thus, kids should be reared in an environment where the children can full control of their behavior rather than following guidelines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.672190113 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4675 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4147064333 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.642857143 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.055391303717 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259667224317 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276117356645 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046616089334 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273142135691 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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