It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
In recent years many people think about the punishment roles in children life and their future. I think the parent should not be allowed to punishment especially physical kind because it is not the right way to teach good behavior to children.
The parent should not allow punishing children because it has a negative impact on children. In my opinion, we have many kind ways to teaching children such as conversation to them, the parent can talk direct or indirect to children and teach them how wrong behavior can negatively affect in children health or other attention; therefore, children think about their feedback reaction and they can accept right way. In my opinion, children have not enough knowledge about their action.
Some people think its needful to have some unphysically punishment because our social rules are based on mental punishment. Owing to people avoid to put on a wrong way. Although They think as same as social rules, parents and teachers should use some mental punishment. For instance, should children do some wrong behavior, parents did not pay attention to children needs such as going on picnic at the weekend; however, In my view, avoiding children from their needs has not benefit for children to change their behavior; unfortunately, parents and teachers think they haven’t any alternative instead punishment efficiency.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with any kind of punishment such a physically or mentally and in think human nature is based on conversation and parents and teachers can teach children with effective conversation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... them how wrong behavior can negatively affect in children health or other attention; the...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid putting'.
Suggestion: avoid putting
...d on mental punishment. Owing to people avoid to put on a wrong way. Although They think as ...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'benefited', 'benefitted'.
Suggestion: benefited; benefitted
...iding children from their needs has not benefit for children to change their behavior;...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their needs has not benefit for children to change their behavior; unfortunately,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25590551181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7470527102 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507874015748 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.251845949 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204797788769 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967408324226 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511460968795 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141549625322 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103596769242 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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