Some people say it is selfish and unnecessary for people to eat meat in a world where food resources are growing increasingly scarce. Others, however, think that a balanced diet is the key to a healthy life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.
Healthy diet plays key role in human’s life, some people think eating meat is useful for healthy life but I think meat is not necessary for body and maybe harm to our body.
In recent century many people except in modern countries believes meat is important for health in that includes a lot of proteins. Therefore demand for meat productions are sharply increased in markets. However, meat industry produce variety productions such as burgers and Sausage. Moreover, some chain fast-food companies like KFC and MacDonald’s are enter way to people diet and advertise meat productions to absorbed different people to use their poor foods. Meat industry growing up mammals and kitchen in bad situation and freeze meat to export for long times. In that eating dead animals harm our body in long terms. It is notable majority of Carnivorous animals does not eat dead meat in the environment but it so awful human are eat corpse bodies.
In last decades many investigate shown using vegetables and fruit have positive result in human body. Vegetarian diet make people healthier and fresher in routine life. Science research in human bodies shown human tooth are create for eating vegetable and just little tooth are suitable for eating meat. Moreover, body Digestive system are more familiar to vegetables and fruit. Not only vegetarian diet more healthy than meat but also more economically for families because vegetable and fruits are cheaper than meats. In addition, our resources for producing mammals and kitchen are too limited in the planet and maybe vegetarian diet become the only way in future world.
Human parents had many changes in their manner to stay live in the planet and now human should find healthy diet like vegetarian to use beneficial resources in the limitation world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13559322034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53765437842 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2933669609 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287492962784 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963372074077 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743862925999 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190213523115 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917494936293 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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