In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
In recent years many countries are suffering from increasing crimes activities. I believe many factors affect crimes rates in societies such as economy, culture, and awareness.
Nowadays economy plays a key role in human lives; therefore, many people want to have better facilities in their life and step on the wrong ways to make more money in quick time. In many cases, some poor people engage in some criminal gangs to find enough money for their family lives. Moreover, unemployment effects on increasing crime for some people who have not enough job opportunity.
One of the major problem to absorb people in crime depends on their culture because some cultures and ethics are close to crimes. For instance, some children who rise in the guilty family have more possibility to fall in criminal activities because human personality depends on people childhood thus parents life has a key role in children future.
Last but not least, should people have enough awareness about crimes in society and their life, it avoids people from doing criminal activities. For example, when people know illegal acts have punishment and it might break down their future opportunity, they are more careful about their activities.
In my opinion, the government should pay more attention to the economy to make welfare for people and decreasing crimes which are relates to the economy problem. Moreover, families must increase their ethics and be cautious about their own children future; however, the educational system should increase people awareness about crimes and their responsibility toward law and society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31640625 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52912417967 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4077941393 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906076277467 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050186468957 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372552221891 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664596119453 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425460611329 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.