In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime?How can we deal with those causes?

Essay topics:

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime?

How can we deal with those causes?

Nowadays, crime is all the rage around the world. Many countries are prone to criminal activities excessively increasing in the areas. This essay will discuss the main reasons for crime including lack of moral education and somewhere inadequate actions by existing law and police department. And also, put forward solutions by spreading general awareness and making strict judgment by the governmental and legal authorities.

Todas, Television, newspaper, radio are full of with the coverage of criminal news that affects the lifestyle of people too. Existing education system is only depends upon textbooks and cramming methods that do not teach the ethical and moral values as people are oblivious of the deeds they are involved because of impulsive behaviour. For instance, not only uneducated, well-educated persons are also found, the prime suspect of crime due to lack of morality. In addition, existing law and police recklessness allow person to do such an act because of inappropriate and delayed actions towards the activities.

To overcome the problem to some extent, spreading awareness is quintessential that may have a profound impact on the perspective of society. Families, educational institutions, clubs, societies can take such necessary steps and arrange a programme that educate persons which restrict people to do crime in order to keep the nation safe and secure. Moreover, strict law need to be set up and cautious governmental action without any negligence will have great significance on the countless crimes.

To sum up, Todays, in the fast-paced world more and more crimes are influenced and increasing everyday. This essay discussed how crime is often caused due to lack of morality and existing law and actions. Also, suggested solutions by spreading awareness and adopting adequate measures towards such activities.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51048951049 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92129466863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1297800534 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147621349265 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481447990901 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04749513622 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089858280427 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307899397787 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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