You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager.  In your letter:•give detail

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager.  In your letter:

•give details of your visit to the restaurant

•explain the reason for the celebration

•say what was good about the food and the service

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my gratitude towards the service and food quality of your restaurant that I enjoyed last Sunday on the occasion of my 25th birthday.

I visited along with my friend's group and some family members at your restaurant and booked a banquet hall for the celebration. The staff was so generous and available right from the starting of the party till the end and also, clicked group pictures to make the moment memorable. Besides this, the waitresses were extremely polite and highly professional in their work.

Your current menu offers a great deal of choice available at the time, especially, the mouth watered smoky momos trey that I ordered along with other items. I was quite impressed with the wonderful local and international drinks available and served at the required room temperature. Apart from this, I was pleased for deciding the venue as we had a delicious meal along with marvellous services provided at your restaurant.

Eventually, I celebrated my birthday in the way I desired as we enjoyed a lot.

I am again thankful for all the astonishing arrangements and such an amazing experience I had.

Yours sincerly

Ana

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09595959596 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79097416361 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3414027744 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152442884552 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561968497162 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452213846016 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650932744506 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452780777593 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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