You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of your visit to the restaurant - Explain the reas

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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of your visit to the restaurant - Explain the reason for the celebration -Say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir,

I am writing a letter to convey my gratitude for the excellent hospitality and the quality of the food which your restaurant provided us in a recent visit.

I, as well as, my friends had recently been visited your restaurant last week to celebrate a farewell party. Although I gave different options to them to arrange the event; however, they were optimistic about your eatery service, and decided to book it for the event. I was a bit curious about the venue initially because It was the farewell event of our crony who is traveling to Canada for three years to complete his post-graduation. Therefore, I just want to make sure that his farewell party should be in a happening place where we could talk in a relax environment and eat various cuisines to make the occasion rememberable for all of us. I must say that they made the right decision to choose your restaurant as the event went well. We have got a chance to spend leisure time to talk about childhood stories in a very comfortable environment. Besides, your menu has a plethora of cuisines to taste including Chinese, Arabic, and Indian, and the service provided by your professional staff was outclassed as they always around the table to help with a refill.

I would like to recommend your restaurant to my colleagues and hope to visit soon for another event.

Best Regards,

Matt

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to convey my grati...
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... happening place where we could talk in a relax environment and eat various cuisines to...
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...und the table to help with a refill. I would like to recommend your restauran...
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...ope to visit soon for another event. Best Regards, Matt
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80672268908 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73610399917 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5985865548 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220061649119 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869002902397 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784843077469 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176659123467 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379655990874 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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