The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
- Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
- Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
- Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to convey my disappointment concerning the new door to door garbage collection system in the area.
I must say that the system was running smoothly at the start; however, it’s been getting worse day by day due to some reason. The prime reason is that there is no supervisor staff in the garbage department to look after the attendance of employees; therefore, the team assigned for a door to door garbage collection in my area is often coming late and or absence from time to time. Due to the above-mentioned problem, the waste material keeps getting stacked usually which invites insects outside my and neighbor's houses and creates an unhygienic environment for our kids to play outsides. Besides, we won’t be able to open the windows and sit in the balcony because of the terrible smell from the waste.
I would appreciate it if you could please take a look at, and I would suggest you to hire a supervisory staff to monitor the attendance of the team to collect the garbage from the area daily
I look forward to hearing a positive repose to solve this problem.
Best Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to convey my disap...
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Line 9, column 457, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'stacked'.
Suggestion: usually stacked
...oblem, the waste material keeps getting stacked usually which invites insects outside my and ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84263959391 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71226591713 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.419047062 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 76.5299724578 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 16.8248392259 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161940712595 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622883018097 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546665366084 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101949086147 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410481711802 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 8.37731958763 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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