Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Expensive celebration events are debatable. Some people believe that it’s just a wastage of money to organized events like wedding and birthday parties while others have a contradictory viewpoint and said that these events are mandatory for people as well as for society. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and explain why celebrating these events are important.
To start with, there are a couple of persuasive reasons why spending much to celebrate events is critical. The prime reason is that celebrating an occasion like a wedding party is once in a life event; therefore, people used to spend much to make it rememberable. This would enable them to keep a track of the entire celebration via digital gadgets in the form of pictures and/or videos. It is generally acknowledged that people often share old memories with their grandchildren which makes them a reason to laugh. A further reason is that this will open the door for a business opportunity in society because they would need support from catering companies to offer a range of cuisines for their guests, similarly from interior designers to arrange flowers to decorate wedding hall. Besides, people will get employment opportunities to earn money and upgrade their living standards.
On the other side, people give equal convincing reasons against overspending to hosting events. Firstly, they are of the view that people shouldn’t spend too much to celebrate occasions because most people in our society are living under the poverty line. Therefore, they should avoid spending money unnecessarily and donate to the needed people in society to uplift their standard of living. Secondly, they could spend money on more valuable tasks such as kids education, so their children could get higher education from known university and become a Doctor to sever for the society in the longer run.
In conclusion, I agree that people should spend money to make the celebration rememberable because it opens the doors for businesses to generate job employment. I am of the view that people should spend a large portion of their money on essential and long-lasting tasks including charity and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22662889518 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76824899484 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549575070822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7538239844 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25049987594 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871873578289 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569129546219 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165507404591 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559139433465 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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